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I'm Actually Yours Part I

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"I could give you fifty reasons why I should be the one you choose...all those other girls – well they're beautiful – but would they write a song for you?" Hey Stephen – Taylor Swift

Lying here
All alone in the dark,
Time slips by
Takes me back to the start
I still recall
That Summer Day in June
That dusty children's playground
The day I first met you...

We were young
So much younger than today,
But you still managed
To steal my heart away
I still recall
The sun and how it shined
Lit up those gorgeous eyes,
Like pretty firework lights...

I was only eight and you were only nine,
You thought you were smarte

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Submitted: April 11, 2011
Image Size: 592 KB
Resolution: 1000×750

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Make:Canon
Model:Canon PowerShot SD780 IS
Shutter Speed:1/25 second
Aperture:F/3.2
Focal Length:6 mm
ISO Speed:400
Date Taken:Aug 30, 2010, 8:39:57 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows
Sensor Size:1mm

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Critique by ~Zsayuri Jan 6, 2013, 12:02:44 AM

The first thing which stands out in my eyes are the hundreds of bubbles from this picture. I didn't see this before I think it looks pretty interesting. I like they way they stand on the die's black circles, some of them look like a fish's eye.

Likewise the multicoloured stripes from the background give some color to this piece and make it more eye catching.

What I don't like and you could improve is the right corner of the image. The bubbles there don't look realy good. The image looks a little distorted in that part and I think it could be better.

What do you think?

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