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And in this darkness, never fleeting, always with me
You bear a flame, drawing nearer
To spirit away these lonely tears
Love so dear and tender, gentle warmth
Scare away the fighting demons
Before the dawn, dark and vile
Stay, my love, always near me
Cross all borders, fences shattered
Don't leave, walk into the evanescence
Of the sighing, swirling mist of morning
Oh, gentle love, formed of sun's golden light
Take us far above the sorrows of this sad night
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Mood: Joy ~RaindropsOnRoses21 Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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~singer22498 Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love it, tho it seems unfinished.
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~RaindropsOnRoses21 Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I was thinking the same thing, it was at the end of this my writer's block set in again, making it near impossible to continue!
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