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The scars you bear I wish I could
Die for, only the best do I want
For you, to be happy, the fault is
Mine own which tore us apart
Some days I was screaming inside
Yet I found complete happiness
With you, when you told me my
Apology was not accepted, it was
Like hearing news of an intimate
Suicide, your hate filled mind
Killed me inside, my thoughts
Are a storm, raging memories
Of every fight, every flaw fighting
For attention, yet the savage longing
To fall once more into you comforting
Arms, but who would I be if I
Allowed myself to go back?
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the title very much :clap: that was a spot on!
last but not least the whole piece has a nice flow
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RaindropsOnRoses21 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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