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The meadow whispers a hushed sigh
Caressed by a gentle breeze dancing by
Blades of grass shiver then rest
Rise and fall like a dreamer's chest
The hum of crickets singing their song
A night of peace that won't last long
There we lay, alone with our love
Stars from heaven hang just above
Your lips so soft, brushing my skin
Its feathery touch makes my head spin
I look into your eyes, deep as the sea
You hold my gaze as you smile at me
The beauty of our love made us appear to shine
We'll always have each other, your hand in mine
This seems unfinished to me for some reason, but I'll submit it anyway :bump:

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Melanie-J-Howle May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
We would love you to join us at :iconbeauty-devine: :heart:
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RaindropsOnRoses21 May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
For sure! :aww:
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Melanie-J-Howle May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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wildwaters Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I think it is lovely! not unfinished! My favorite is the rise and fall of a dreamer's chest, ahh, so true!
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RaindropsOnRoses21 Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment, I really appreciate it!
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:iconbelfasterd:
This is so touching!!! It seems finished to me :)
Really beautiful poem!!!!! <3
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RaindropsOnRoses21 Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment <3
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:iconbelfasterd:
No problem, it is a great poem :)
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dreamsinstatic Sep 30, 2011  Professional Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features
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RaindropsOnRoses21 Oct 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! :hug:
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